User talk:Digiemperor1

Welcome
Hi, welcome to DigimonWiki! Thanks for your edit to the Digimon armoured colours page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- Lanate (Talk) 16:33, August 5, 2010

I'm happy to help
Thanks fod the message and checking out my fan-fic. If pointers are what you're looking for, here's the number one issue I founf with it: It's help both you and your readers if you used the classic book style. Inj your story, the sentences are mized togetyher, but if you add a space or two between each quote or paragraph, that'd make it both look better and easier to read. Also, try adding a few descriptions of your characters and their digimon before the chapter. This'll help the readers differentiate each character before the series rather than just being introduced to a new character they have no idea about. But aside from that, it looks pretty good! I honestly think Adventure 02 is my least favorite season, so it'll be intresting to see how this one turns out. Also, if it's not too much trouble, could you leave some feedback on the talk page for Spirit's Edge?--Wh!te$tar 20:58, August 6, 2010 (UTC)