User talk:TheBlackDemon1996

Daigo and Maki
As for why it's being made invisible -- the grammar is very poor, the terminology is all wrong, and the actual content doesn't focus on what's important about the scenes, but instead has a lackadaisical focus on the trivia. It's not appropriate for being published on the wiki, since it doesn't meet the basic requirements of the wiki's manual of style.

As for "expand and specify" - those portions of their history cover the greater majority of their screentime (and their own character history). Your write-up gives more weight to a short flashback at the beginning of one film than to the total scenes they had throughout the full four films. So, "expand and specify". Instead of just saying "he monitors Taichi", go into what the films actually show him doing. They were characters before that flashback.

Also, this kind of stuff is supposed to be handled on the article talk pages, since it's about the article text, instead of being treated like some sort of personal attack. Furthermore, don't ever just remove a change request without either completing the request or discussing it on the talk page -- it is considered edit warring and you will be censured for it if it happens again. 23:51, March 8, 2017 (UTC)


 * Well I hate to be rude my friend but if you thought my grammar was poor then why didn't you fix it? It's not like you couldn't, you use the thing that changes a page's info to make it invisible.  And what I put was a rough outline for others with more info that me to fill in the gaps, that's why I left the "this is a stub" thing.  Isn't that how wikis word? --TheBlackDemon1996 (talk) 10:39, March 9, 2017 (UTC)