Fan talk:Under Dark Wings/Chapter 1

This is pretty good. I think I was using the same sort of writing style in my fan-fic. However, I would like to know where I could find a backstory. It says this is chapter 1, yet I've got no idea how Takuya and Koji met with the adventure kids in the first place. Plus, I'd like to know if this Amon is. Is it a digimon or a person? But aside from that, it left me interested and wanting to read more. However if it's not too much to ask, could you watch my fan-fic called Spirit's edge? I already uploaded 4 chapters and wrote a whole page. But instead of writing on the discussion, just leae a messahe on my talk page. (It really interests you once you read the new kids' backstories) Hope to hear from you, can't wait for the new chapter --Wh!te$tar 00:14, August 2, 2010 (UTC)