Thread:Marcusbwfc/@comment-134861-20190304150953/@comment-134861-20190305133119

"I Do try and put as much relevant info as possible when I write (with context and such) but maybe I goa bit over board at times."

What it means is that there is a certain tendency on animanga wikis to repeat quotes word-for-word, or talk about battle scenes as if one was giving stage directions, and we want to avoid that. The sections should be written pretty similar to how you would if you were trying to catch a friend up on the scene -- one who hadn't seen it.

So, the important thing isn't "Mummymon turned to BlackWarGreymon and said 'Just simply forget about all these feelings nonsense and follow orders like you're supposed to!'", it would be "Mummymon responded by instructing BlackWarGreymon to quit the existentialism and get back to work." You can still cover every scene and all the important bits, but try to word it as a summary that focuses on what's being accomplished, rather than the actual words and movements used.

We also want to focus on covering the events as they happened, rather than as they are presented to the audience. So, we try to avoid "it is later revealed".

Keeping in mind that I haven't played that far into the game, some examples would be:


 * "Crusadermon murders the president of Kamishiro Enterprises, Satoru Kamishiro - though claims this wasn't actually intended, and did it due to the thoughts of Rei manipulating her into doing it."
 * "Crusadermon murders Satoru Kamishiro, the president of Kamishiro Enterprises, but blames this on Rei's latent influence."


 * "After finding information that reveals that Kamishiro Enterprise acquired fellow company Nile Corp illegally, Rie fires most of Kamishiro's staff as punishment. She later reveals to Ryuji Mishima that she fabricated this information to improve her own standing in the company."
 * "Rie fabricated evidence that Kamishiro had illegally acquired Nile Corp, and used it as a pretext to fire most of Kamishiro's staff. She later revealed this deception to Ryuji."


 * "Rei is the one responsible for using the experimental medical procedures to upload Erika Mishima's memories to Eden, as if she gains too many, she will die. This however, is very expensive - so Rei forces Ryuji to do everything she says, otherwise she will pull her funding. "
 * "Rie offers to fund the expensive service of siphoning off Erika's excess memories to Eden, keeping her alive, but uses the threat of pulling funding to keep Ryuji in line."


 * "Rei discovers this though and reveals her identity as Crusadermon to them, stating she has no intention to let them survive now that they have seen the truth and attacks them"
 * "When Rie finds out about their infiltration, she decides they are loose ends and attacks them, as Crusadermon."

There are times when it's appropriate to reference the exact words that a character uses -- but that's usually when that specific line will be called back later for emotional impact, such as one character using another's catchphrase in a symbolic way, or "recalling that inspiring thing grandpa told me that we're about to make literal", etc. (Off the top of my head, Kairi in KH3 repeating words that Xion used is something worth quoting, because the specific words are important to the plot. Or, Subject X stating "may your heart be your guiding key", a clue to their identity.)