User talk:Digiemperor1

Welcome
Hi, welcome to DigimonWiki! Thanks for your edit to the Digimon armoured colours page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- Lanate (Talk) 16:33, August 5, 2010

I'm happy to help
Thanks fod the message and checking out my fan-fic. If pointers are what you're looking for, here's the number one issue I founf with it: It's help both you and your readers if you used the classic book style. Inj your story, the sentences are mized togetyher, but if you add a space or two between each quote or paragraph, that'd make it both look better and easier to read. Also, try adding a few descriptions of your characters and their digimon before the chapter. This'll help the readers differentiate each character before the series rather than just being introduced to a new character they have no idea about. But aside from that, it looks pretty good! I honestly think Adventure 02 is my least favorite season, so it'll be intresting to see how this one turns out. Also, if it's not too much trouble, could you leave some feedback on the talk page for Spirit's Edge?--Wh!te$tar 20:58, August 6, 2010 (UTC)

Glad you like my story. It's still weird habing someone say it's the best! (I think you said best. There was a typo) But I read about your Frontier comic and it sounds really cool! I can't wait 'til it comes up. Also, I forgot to mention you might be able to add a gallery to your fan-fic that way people can easilly view the different chapters. Also, I've been wondering what people think about my characters. I just can't decide which one's my favorite 'cause I worked so hard on each of them. But if you don't mind, I'd also like to mention another friend of mine, Destiny Calling, who's fan-fic I'm also following. I bet you two'd get along too. Okay, I'm done rambing now! enjoy the story--Wh!te$tar 22:09, August 6, 2010 (UTC)

No, the new girls are more like the original digidestined. See if you read the chapters, you'll see the old kids have been employed as bodyguards for the new kids, who each have partner digimon. To be honest, I think I like Michael and Christine a little better than the others. He's so much darker than other leaders sand she's got a more hearwrenching backstory that we haven't seen since Jeri. And speaking of dark themes, I think you're trying yto make your comic darker than others, so a little advice. Sometimes other material can inspire and help with your writing. I played Kingdom hearts, Zelda, and watched the Tales series to work on a dramatic story and started watching Higrashi to get into a sorta evil mood (I highly recomend it as ananime). But here I am, spilling my guts out again. The lasyt thing I wanted to ask was if you like some of the themes I added for my characters. I listed them down in the Spirits Edge discussion, but I like Terminus' theme the most (you can't appreciate how evil it is until you read the lyrics for it. But, I'll leave you alone now. Sorry!--Wh!te$tar 22:29, August 6, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but what do you mean by coloring? Also, I'm glad you like it. (But you should probaby sign your posts with the signature button. That's what I do) Back to coloring, do you mean those sprites and videos on my page? Because I asked KrytenKoro to do those. But still, thanks for the feedback! Also hope you like the songs--Wh!te$tar 01:03, August 7, 2010 (UTC)