User talk:Digiemperor1

Welcome
Hi, welcome to DigimonWiki! Thanks for your edit to the Digimon armoured colours page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- Lanate (Talk) 16:33, August 5, 2010

I'm happy to help
Thanks fod the message and checking out my fan-fic. If pointers are what you're looking for, here's the number one issue I founf with it: It's help both you and your readers if you used the classic book style. Inj your story, the sentences are mized togetyher, but if you add a space or two between each quote or paragraph, that'd make it both look better and easier to read. Also, try adding a few descriptions of your characters and their digimon before the chapter. This'll help the readers differentiate each character before the series rather than just being introduced to a new character they have no idea about. But aside from that, it looks pretty good! I honestly think Adventure 02 is my least favorite season, so it'll be intresting to see how this one turns out. Also, if it's not too much trouble, could you leave some feedback on the talk page for Spirit's Edge?--Wh!te$tar 20:58, August 6, 2010 (UTC)

Glad you like my story. It's still weird habing someone say it's the best! (I think you said best. There was a typo) But I read about your Frontier comic and it sounds really cool! I can't wait 'til it comes up. Also, I forgot to mention you might be able to add a gallery to your fan-fic that way people can easilly view the different chapters. Also, I've been wondering what people think about my characters. I just can't decide which one's my favorite 'cause I worked so hard on each of them. But if you don't mind, I'd also like to mention another friend of mine, Destiny Calling, who's fan-fic I'm also following. I bet you two'd get along too. Okay, I'm done rambing now! enjoy the story--Wh!te$tar 22:09, August 6, 2010 (UTC)

No, the new girls are more like the original digidestined. See if you read the chapters, you'll see the old kids have been employed as bodyguards for the new kids, who each have partner digimon. To be honest, I think I like Michael and Christine a little better than the others. He's so much darker than other leaders sand she's got a more hearwrenching backstory that we haven't seen since Jeri. And speaking of dark themes, I think you're trying yto make your comic darker than others, so a little advice. Sometimes other material can inspire and help with your writing. I played Kingdom hearts, Zelda, and watched the Tales series to work on a dramatic story and started watching Higrashi to get into a sorta evil mood (I highly recomend it as ananime). But here I am, spilling my guts out again. The lasyt thing I wanted to ask was if you like some of the themes I added for my characters. I listed them down in the Spirits Edge discussion, but I like Terminus' theme the most (you can't appreciate how evil it is until you read the lyrics for it. But, I'll leave you alone now. Sorry!--Wh!te$tar 22:29, August 6, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but what do you mean by coloring? Also, I'm glad you like it. (But you should probaby sign your posts with the signature button. That's what I do) Back to coloring, do you mean those sprites and videos on my page? Because I asked KrytenKoro to do those. But still, thanks for the feedback! Also hope you like the songs--Wh!te$tar 01:03, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Cool! I'll go check it out. If you want any help with it, i'm glad to help. But I was just thinking. I've got a new fan-fic idea, but don't really feel like writing it since I'm still writing spirits' edge. If you're interested, please let me know!--Wh!te$tar 17:27, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Na, I don't text. I write all my articles on my computer. and sorry 'bout that last message. I deleted it. T.T But still, If you're intrested in another story, I'm more than happy to let you use it. I swear there's nothing bad like I just wrote. Sorry.--Wh!te$tar 18:04, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Digimon: Digital Nights
Long ago, digimon and humans lived in peace and creayted an empire that covered the entire planet. But one day, the empire just fell apart. Only remnants of the old kiongdom remain. This is the backstory for Digimon: Digital Nights.

The story has to do with a girl named Margret, but she's not just any girl. she's actually a princess in the digital World. In this Digital World, there are already humans living here, except like humans on earth, they don't know about earth. Only Margret and members of the Royal family know about earth. The only other thing is she reigns over one of three countries in the Digital World, each ruled by humans and competing for dominance.

Well it's her twelfth birthday and she still hasn't found a digimon partner(every child must find a true partner before their thirteenth birthday) But instead, she has the Chief of her Royal Guard(insert royal knight here). But on her way back to her castle, the town's attacked and her digimon turned into a rookie. In the chaos, her parents are kidnapped and the town burned to the ground.

on earth, three kids(travis, zelda, and Ray) are the only three in their school still into digimon(It's a cartoon. think tamers) but on their way home, they see strange lights from the junkyard. It turns out these are digi-eggs. They take them home, and that's when Margret falls through a digital gate. she explains her situation and how they need to protect her. so Travis lets her stay at his house in hiding.

The adventure takes place both in the digital wotld and human world. They fight in Tokyo to stop digimon from the "brotherhood" trying to assasinate Margret, and in the digital world fimnd her parents. but they soon find that Margrets parents are being held by the brotherhood, who destroyed her town originally. After they defeat each of the four Brotherhood leaders, they defeat the true leader. He reaveals he's been destroying towns and taking digimon data to revive an ancient diety.

But they learn this ancient Diety is actually a human scientist, Dahlia. Once resurrected, she destroys the leader and reveals her true intentions. In the 80's, she was one of the scientist researching the himans who diappeared into the diogital world. Upon seeing it for herelf, she tried exterminating digimon to get to the rescpources the digital world had to offer. First she tried unleashing the x-program, which wiped out several digimonl but not all of them. She hadn't counyted on the X-antibody, so she created two artificial digimon, Ahrimon and Ormazdamon(see Zoroastrianism). Because the digimon were polar oposites, she figured they'd destroy themselves and the digimon with them. but the humans sealed them away and she was left baffleds.

Finally, she disguised herself as a human mother, who claimed her baby had been stolen by digimon. The feuds ripped the empire apart and left both sides weak. Dahlia went on and turned her own data into the X-virus, waiting 'til the day no digimon could survive.

But there was hope. Margret, with her pure, untainted bloodline, had the X-antibody sealed inside her. But as she released it to the qorld, she lost her digi-core and went into a coma. Travis then joined their cores, each sharing data as they became co-dependent.

From there, they must stop Dahlia from reviving the god-digimon before they destroy both worlds and every digimon! They journey across both globes, trying to gathere the help of the other heirs from the other kingdoms and unite the planet to stop Dahlia.

So, what'd you think? YI'm putting my trust in you to create original characters with the spark you talk about fpor your other fan-fics. But I do have one request. Make margret look like Nina from breath of Fire 4(try the gallery at DragonTear.net) and create an assasin girl who wields, two blade fan, an umbrella with hidden knives, and controls two ribbons like RhodoKnightmon. Good luck.--Wh!te$tar 18:46, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

That's a good idea
Sorry about that. I just finished the summary. I had to stop in the middle 'cause my parents needed me and all this crap. But I seriously like your ideas too. Like I said, your ideas are awesome. That's why I asked for your help. But whatever changes you make, I'm sure they'll be totally awesome!

Sorry
Hey digiemperor1. I'm not gonna be signing back on at least until tonight. See, I've been waiting for a new model ship( Explains the name, huh?) and I'm too excited to buyild it to report back. Building boats is really a stress relieving hobby (a two year old brother, a brother two years younger and two parents. You know the drill) But anyway, just write down any ideas and I'll write back tonight.--Wh!te$tar 18:58, August 7, 2010 (UTC)