User talk:Sagethebeast

Welcome
Hi, welcome to ! Thanks for your edit to the Mimi Tachikawa page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! Ryo205 (talk) 23:15, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Copyedit
If an admin has placed a copyedit notice, that means that the section is a mess and should not be made visible until it's been signed off on. 03:57, July 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * This is warning for violating wiki Manual of Style polices after a reminder from site staff. Your edits were unwelcome and have been reverted. Further vandalism can lead to a block from editing. 20:06, July 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * Specific errors:


 * Material synopses should be in-universe: this means that Mimi's section should not say "Mimi appears in the PSP game" because that's obvious from the header, and arbitrary, reader-PoV terms like "Piedmon's saga" should not be used.
 * Material synopses should not be comparative: the synopsis should not waste time comparing her to her anime self (if there is a true difference in personality from the Japanese broadcast, it should be covered in the article's personality section).
 * Material synopses should be comprehensive: the synopsis should cover her entire story within the game, not just a few scenes that you liked.
 * Material synopses should use present-tense for events that occur in the story's "present"; this means that you shouldn't use past tense for events that are happening on-screen.
 * Links should point to the correct page; this means that MetalEtemon and Rosemon should be linked to the actual characters' pages, not the species' pages.
 * Lists with more than two members should use commas after every member, and not omit them for the last two: "Matt, Joe, Sora and T.K" is improper.